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It makes me so happy when you take good care of yourself.
I am happy to see that you go to the gym.
I am happy when you eat healthy food.
But ... ''I am fearless'' - is some idea of not taking care of yourself. '' am fearless'' is just propaganda.
I hope that for you your life is more important than such a propaganda.
Please, could you check this and let me know if it's grammatically correct.
I am happy to see that you go to the gym.
I am happy when you eat healthy food.
But ... ''I am fearless'' - is some idea of not taking care of yourself. '' am fearless'' is just propaganda.
I hope that for you your life is more important than such a propaganda.
Please, could you check this and let me know if it's grammatically correct.
- Inglês (EUA)
The first half is awesome! The last half... “But, ‘I am fearless’ is not taking care of yourself. It is just propaganda. I hope your life is more important to you than that.”
When we use “that” at the end, we know we are talking about the previously mention propaganda based on context. :) Sounds more natural that way.
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