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They need to be punished by prison sentences.
As a result, the improved behaviour of ex-offenders could contribute to societies positively when they are released. soa natural?
As a result, the improved behaviour of ex-offenders could contribute to societies positively when they are released. soa natural?
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This is OK, but I think it sounds better if you move the 'positively'.
As a result, the improved behaviour of ex-offenders could positively contribute to societies when they are released.
'improved' and 'contribute' already implies positive in this context, so we can simply drop the word.
As a result, the improved behaviour of ex-offenders could contribute to societies when they are released.
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