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15 dez 2017
- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
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Castelhano (Espanha)
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Hey Joe!
I met you on May 2nd at Big Joy Family Bakery & Cafe for the first time. It has been almost 8 months since we know each other. Actually, you're the first friend in the U.S. I must say, I learned a lot of things in English from you. Thank you for as always being such a good friend. I will never forget you've done to me. I owe you. I have a duty to learn English even I'm back to Japan because I don't want you to be disappointed. In the future, I'm looking forward to grading a beer with you in Japan. I wait for you. See you soon, Joe! soa natural?
Hey Joe!
I met you on May 2nd at Big Joy Family Bakery & Cafe for the first time. It has been almost 8 months since we know each other. Actually, you're the first friend in the U.S. I must say, I learned a lot of things in English from you. Thank you for as always being such a good friend. I will never forget you've done to me. I owe you. I have a duty to learn English even I'm back to Japan because I don't want you to be disappointed. In the future, I'm looking forward to grading a beer with you in Japan. I wait for you. See you soon, Joe! soa natural?
I met you on May 2nd at Big Joy Family Bakery & Cafe for the first time. It has been almost 8 months since we know each other. Actually, you're the first friend in the U.S. I must say, I learned a lot of things in English from you. Thank you for as always being such a good friend. I will never forget you've done to me. I owe you. I have a duty to learn English even I'm back to Japan because I don't want you to be disappointed. In the future, I'm looking forward to grading a beer with you in Japan. I wait for you. See you soon, Joe! soa natural?
I've been living in CA, the USA for almost 8 months. I have almost 10 days to go, I'm gonna be back to Japan. Here my sentence is for my friend. Could you make a correction, please?
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15 dez 2017
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
I can understand it fine but let me correct a few things.
"...almost 8 months since *we've *known each other."
"Actually, you're *my first friend in the U.S. *and I must say, I learned a lot of things *about English from you."
"Thank you, as always, for being such a good friend."
"I will never forget *what you've done for me."
"I have a duty to learn English even *when I'm back *in Japan because I don't want you to be disappointed."
"I'm looking forward to *having a beer with you in Japan *in the future."
"I will be waiting for you." sounds better than "I will wait for you."
You did a great job though! I hope you enjoyed your time in the USA :).
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
I can understand it fine but let me correct a few things.
"...almost 8 months since *we've *known each other."
"Actually, you're *my first friend in the U.S. *and I must say, I learned a lot of things *about English from you."
"Thank you, as always, for being such a good friend."
"I will never forget *what you've done for me."
"I have a duty to learn English even *when I'm back *in Japan because I don't want you to be disappointed."
"I'm looking forward to *having a beer with you in Japan *in the future."
"I will be waiting for you." sounds better than "I will wait for you."
You did a great job though! I hope you enjoyed your time in the USA :).
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- Japonês
@JNx Thank you for making the correction with such a long sentence!
I'm gonna write down these!
Thanks! Good night!
I'm gonna write down these!
Thanks! Good night!
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