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Tom jerked head and saw Mary, crossing the street. He wished she wasn't there. He knew, that he had to greet her, but he didn't want to do this soa natural?
- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
The punctuation is a little off.
There are commas in spots where they aren't needed.
"Tom jerked his head when he saw Mary crossing the street. He wished that she wasn't there. He knew that he had to greet her, but he didn't want to do this"
Also for the last sentence, "but he didn't want to." sounds more natural.
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