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It's a work for school and I will want to check the spelling, Thanks ;) :
- The first thing (An other thing) that must be said is that it's not to us to punish the students. They need to be followed to understand all the side effects.
- I have the impression that students take more smart pills when we punish them, just to contradict us. Indeed, I know a mother who had punished her daughter. After that, the young girl has taken more smart pill, then she has lost her friends because she has do many tantrum and she is fell in depress.
- Yes, in a way, but it's proven a long time ago that the punishments are less efficient than the personalized followed.
- However that may be nobody use the same punishment in these conditions. Many people don't know how react to taking of smart pills.
- In my opinion, I think that the students who take smart pills can be subject to a pressure by their parents for their academic success. Also, punish the students is not a solution to the problem.
- In a way, punish the students comes down to consider them as children. In their age, it's need to consider them as adult.
- The society puts the students in competition for the academic success, it's maybe for this that they take smart pills. In this case, the punishment is not appropriate. It’s not a solution.
- As the students become addictive, punish them is useless.
It's a work for school and I will want to check the spelling, Thanks ;) :
- The first thing (An other thing) that must be said is that it's not to us to punish the students. They need to be followed to understand all the side effects.
- I have the impression that students take more smart pills when we punish them, just to contradict us. Indeed, I know a mother who had punished her daughter. After that, the young girl has taken more smart pill, then she has lost her friends because she has do many tantrum and she is fell in depress.
- Yes, in a way, but it's proven a long time ago that the punishments are less efficient than the personalized followed.
- However that may be nobody use the same punishment in these conditions. Many people don't know how react to taking of smart pills.
- In my opinion, I think that the students who take smart pills can be subject to a pressure by their parents for their academic success. Also, punish the students is not a solution to the problem.
- In a way, punish the students comes down to consider them as children. In their age, it's need to consider them as adult.
- The society puts the students in competition for the academic success, it's maybe for this that they take smart pills. In this case, the punishment is not appropriate. It’s not a solution.
- As the students become addictive, punish them is useless.
- The first thing (An other thing) that must be said is that it's not to us to punish the students. They need to be followed to understand all the side effects.
- I have the impression that students take more smart pills when we punish them, just to contradict us. Indeed, I know a mother who had punished her daughter. After that, the young girl has taken more smart pill, then she has lost her friends because she has do many tantrum and she is fell in depress.
- Yes, in a way, but it's proven a long time ago that the punishments are less efficient than the personalized followed.
- However that may be nobody use the same punishment in these conditions. Many people don't know how react to taking of smart pills.
- In my opinion, I think that the students who take smart pills can be subject to a pressure by their parents for their academic success. Also, punish the students is not a solution to the problem.
- In a way, punish the students comes down to consider them as children. In their age, it's need to consider them as adult.
- The society puts the students in competition for the academic success, it's maybe for this that they take smart pills. In this case, the punishment is not appropriate. It’s not a solution.
- As the students become addictive, punish them is useless.
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- The first thing (An other thing) that must be said is that it's not to us to punish the students. They need to be followed to understand all the side effects.
- I have the impression that students take more smart pills when we punish them, just to oppose us. Indeed, I know a mother who had punished her daughter. After that, the young girl has taken more smart pill, then she has lost her friends because she has had many tantrums and she fell in depression.
- Yes, in a way, but t's proven a long time ago that the punishments are less efficient than the personalised follow-up.
- However that may be nobody use the same punishment in these conditions. Many people don't know how to react to taking of smart pills. (not sure)
- In my opinion, I think that the students who take smart pills can be subject to a pressure by their parents for their academic success. Also, punishing the students is not a solution to the problem.
- In a way, punishing the students comes down to considering them as children. In their age, we need to view them as adults.
- The society puts the students in competition for academic success, Maybe for this that they take smart pills. In this case, the punishment is not appropriate. It’s not a solution.
- As the students become addictive, punishing them is useless.
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