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16 out 2017
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Alemão
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Inglês (EUA)
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Castelhano (Chile)
Pergunta sobre Inglês (EUA)
Hello, Thai! Thank you for having me and it was so amazing that I could do a lot of things in NYC. After I met you, so many things have changed for two years. (Of course, in a good way) I was confused by myself and didn't have a confidence about my life, but you have helped me a lot. I sincerely appreciate you for everything. You are really a nice person and also are a precious friend to me. For couple weeks, I have met many new people and I realized that I was a very lucky person. Even though there are so many different people, it's really hard to find someone really nice like you. You must be uncomfortable with staying with me in some ways, but thank you for being so nice to me every time. I don't know which country I'm gonna live in, but you are always welcome to my home. Also, you can stay at the Puerto Rico, when the situation is ok. Take care and see you soon. soa natural?
Hello, Thai! Thank you for having me and it was so amazing that I could do a lot of things in NYC. After I met you, so many things have changed for two years. (Of course, in a good way) I was confused by myself and didn't have a confidence about my life, but you have helped me a lot. I sincerely appreciate you for everything. You are really a nice person and also are a precious friend to me. For couple weeks, I have met many new people and I realized that I was a very lucky person. Even though there are so many different people, it's really hard to find someone really nice like you. You must be uncomfortable with staying with me in some ways, but thank you for being so nice to me every time. I don't know which country I'm gonna live in, but you are always welcome to my home. Also, you can stay at the Puerto Rico, when the situation is ok. Take care and see you soon. soa natural?
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16 out 2017
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
@Jowpark
just SLIGHTLY unnatural.
a few corrections:
Thank you for having me (,) and it was so amazing that I could do a lot of things in NYC.
After I met you, so many things have changed (within these) two years.
I was confused (in) myself and didn't have confidence about my life, but you have helped me a lot.
You are really a nice person and also a precious friend to me.
For (a) couple (of) weeks, ....
I don't know which country I'm (going) to live in....
* but you can do gonna as well, since you are talking to a friend . (GOING is grammatically correct though)
Also, you can stay (In) Puerto Rico,....
( )=corrections
....= continuation of the sentence (which need NO corrections)
GOOD JOB THOUGH! woo :))
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