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Against this victimised history, many anime/ manga artists have criticised the government’s attitudes and depicted the Japanese atrocities through their works. However, these works illustrating the cruelty of war have become a type of genre called ‘war fantasy,’ and the content has begun to be categorized as an ‘entertainment,’ which is equivalent to what government have been doing. soa natural?
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It's all perfect up until the last sentence. Just fix it so it reads like this:
"However, these works illustrating the cruelty of war have created the genre "War Fantasy", and the content has begun to be categorized as "entertainment", which is equivalent to what the government has been doing."
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
It's all perfect up until the last sentence. Just fix it so it reads like this:
"However, these works illustrating the cruelty of war have created the genre "War Fantasy", and the content has begun to be categorized as "entertainment", which is equivalent to what the government has been doing."
Very well written.
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- Inglês (EUA)
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Against this history of victimisation many anime and manga artists have criticised the government attitude by depicting the Japanese atrocities in their works.
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