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I want to make a copy for an advertisement. And the product is a lotion which has twice power of moisturizing effect. What I wrote is 'Put it once, feel moisturized twice'. Is this good? soa natural?
I want to make a copy for an advertisement. And the product is a lotion which has twice power of moisturizing effect. What I wrote is 'Put it once, feel moisturized twice'. Is this good? soa natural?
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3 jun 2016
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
"I want to make a slogan for an advertisement. And the product is lotion, which has twice the moisturizing effect. What I want to say is 'put on once, feel moisturized twice'.
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
"I want to make a slogan for an advertisement. And the product is lotion, which has twice the moisturizing effect. What I want to say is 'put on once, feel moisturized twice'.
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
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