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Although the expansion of the computer markets might have given Bill Gates to success, the main reason of his success would be attributed to the new softwares that he created at that time. soa natural?
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i'd just like to change 2 words.....
1. change the word "given" to "driven"
(....might have driven Bill Gates to success...)
2. change the word "of" to "for"
(... the main reason for his success...)
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- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
i'd just like to change 2 words.....
1. change the word "given" to "driven"
(....might have driven Bill Gates to success...)
2. change the word "of" to "for"
(... the main reason for his success...)
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