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13 mai 2016
- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
Pergunta sobre Inglês (EUA)
A flower that blooms out of season
The Vinca I bought last summer is starting bloom again now. 🌸
A stem appeared to be broken 🌿, so I put a plaster put on it made of toothpicks and sellotape.
I'm smiling , because today I
discovered a new sprout emerging from the stem. 🌱
The plaster is effective against not only the human being but also the plant.
The Vinca endured severe winter and the roots gained weight.
I want it to have a lot of beautiful flowers in a coming suitable season. 🌸🌸 soa natural?
A flower that blooms out of season
The Vinca I bought last summer is starting bloom again now. 🌸
A stem appeared to be broken 🌿, so I put a plaster put on it made of toothpicks and sellotape.
I'm smiling , because today I
discovered a new sprout emerging from the stem. 🌱
The plaster is effective against not only the human being but also the plant.
The Vinca endured severe winter and the roots gained weight.
I want it to have a lot of beautiful flowers in a coming suitable season. 🌸🌸 soa natural?
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13 mai 2016
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- Inglês (EUA)
Natural
Good, only a few things..
I think it would sound a bit better with:
-"Is beginning to bloom again"
-maybe changing "plaster" to "splint"
-"endured a severe winter"
-maybe "in its suitable season" or "in the upcoming season"
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Japonês
Thank you for your advice.
- Inglês (EUA)
Natural
Good, only a few things..
I think it would sound a bit better with:
-"Is beginning to bloom again"
-maybe changing "plaster" to "splint"
-"endured a severe winter"
-maybe "in its suitable season" or "in the upcoming season"
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- Japonês
Thank you for your help❣️
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