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Please, coul you correct this text? thanks!
She is overweight. She wants to go on a diet to lose weight. I suggested she eat a balanced diet with calcium, fibre, irion, proteins, carbohydrates and fat.
Also, I recommended she cut down on chocolate and give up snak and overeat.
She is overweight. She wants to go on a diet to lose weight. I suggested she eat a balanced diet with calcium, fibre, irion, proteins, carbohydrates and fat.
Also, I recommended she cut down on chocolate and give up snak and overeat.
- Inglês (EUA)
She is overweight. She wants to go on a diet to lose weight. I suggested she eat a balanced diet with calcium, fibre, irion, proteins, carbohydrates and fat.
Also, I recommended she cut down on chocolate and give up snacks and overeating.
Note: use fiber if its american, if its canadian or british use fibre
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