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8 jul 2017
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Could you correct my English and make it sound more natural, please?
Thank you very much for your kindness. I really appreciate your words while reading your thoughtfulness. I make sure to hydrate as much as I can and be careful not to be too thirsty. Water is essential to our life, isn't it?
Could you correct my English and make it sound more natural, please?
Thank you very much for your kindness. I really appreciate your words while reading your thoughtfulness. I make sure to hydrate as much as I can and be careful not to be too thirsty. Water is essential to our life, isn't it?
Thank you very much for your kindness. I really appreciate your words while reading your thoughtfulness. I make sure to hydrate as much as I can and be careful not to be too thirsty. Water is essential to our life, isn't it?
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- Inglês (EUA)
I would say, "Thank you very much for your kindness. I really appreciate the thoughtfulness in your words. I make sure to hydrate as much as I can and be careful to not get too thirsty. Water is essential to our life, isn't it?"
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Thank you very much for your kindness. I really appreciate your thoughtful words. I make sure to hydrate myself as much as i can to not be thirsty. Water is essential to our life, isnt it?
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Thank you very much for your kindness. I really appreciate your words while reading your thoughtfulness. I will make sure to keep hydrate as much as I can and be careful not to be too thirsty. Water is essential to our life, isn't it?
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- Inglês (EUA)
I would say, "Thank you very much for your kindness. I really appreciate the thoughtfulness in your words. I make sure to hydrate as much as I can and be careful to not get too thirsty. Water is essential to our life, isn't it?"
Almost perfect!
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@siopao Thank you very much! I really appreciate your correction.
- Português (Portugal)
its good but the text is very formal, but if you want be formal, your text is right
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- Inglês (EUA)
I've changed it a little to :
"Thank you very much. I really appreciate reading your kind and thoughtful words. I will make sure to hydrate myself and avoid getting too thirsty. Water is essential to our life, after all."
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I really appreciate your thoughtful words. I make sure to hydrate as much as I can, being careful not to get too thirsty.
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