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Could you please correct my diary?
All of a sudden, the flash news came in. It's an earthquake striked in Kyushu, Japan last night. It's occpied every TV chunnels in
an instant. I worry how big it was and the disaster caused great damage to people. I send all my prayer to Kyushu. I will pray for people's safety.
All of a sudden, the flash news came in. It's an earthquake striked in Kyushu, Japan last night. It's occpied every TV chunnels in
an instant. I worry how big it was and the disaster caused great damage to people. I send all my prayer to Kyushu. I will pray for people's safety.
- Inglês (EUA)
All of a sudden the news flash came in. An earthquake had stuck in Kyushu, Japan last night. It occupied every TV channel in an instant. I'm worried about how big it was, and the amount of damage the disaster caused people. I'm sending all my prayers to Kyushu and I pray for people's safety.
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- Inglês (EUA)
An earthquake struck in Kyushu, Japan last night. It instantly occupied every channel. I was worried about how big it was and the damage it caused. I am sending all my prayers for their safety in Kyushu.
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- Inglês (EUA)
All of a sudden the news flash came in. An earthquake had stuck in Kyushu, Japan last night. It occupied every TV channel in an instant. I'm worried about how big it was, and the amount of damage the disaster caused people. I'm sending all my prayers to Kyushu and I pray for people's safety.
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