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1.
The sooner you confess to her, the less she gets hurt.
彼女に早く告白すれば、彼女の痛みはより少ない。
2.
The more sugar she consumes, the more risks of getting sick raise.
砂糖を食べれば食べるほど、彼女の病気になるリスクはあがる。
soa natural?
The sooner you confess to her, the less she gets hurt.
彼女に早く告白すれば、彼女の痛みはより少ない。
2.
The more sugar she consumes, the more risks of getting sick raise.
砂糖を食べれば食べるほど、彼女の病気になるリスクはあがる。
soa natural?
- Inglês (EUA)
- Chinês Simples (China) Quase Fluente
Um pouco artificial
1 is OK
2) The more sugar she consumes, the higher the risk of getting sick
When you say "the more the risk", it already means that the risk is raised, so the "raise" at the end is not needed. Furthermore, "higher" is more commonly used than "more" when we talk about risks.
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Chinês Simples (China) Quase Fluente
Um pouco artificial
1 is OK
2) The more sugar she consumes, the higher the risk of getting sick
When you say "the more the risk", it already means that the risk is raised, so the "raise" at the end is not needed. Furthermore, "higher" is more commonly used than "more" when we talk about risks.
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