Please check my article ,it is fluent or not.

I am a college student in Kaohsiung, and I very much love my hometown. One day , I will introduce my hometown to the world.

I was born in Chiayi , Taiwan.
It is located in the south of Taiwan.
There are many delicious foods such as the chicken rice and the square cookies.
Many people come to visit the Wenhua Rd. Night Market . It is noisy and joyous,and the price is lower than most other foreign country.
In Chiayi, I would suggest you to go to the Lan Tan Reservoir ,which has the beautiful sceneries.