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The fashion industry normally encourage young girls to starve themselves in an attempt to meet the super model criteria of being skinny. It is common that some girls tend to put their fingers in their mouths and puke out all they have just had after a meal and this practice finally leads to anorexia and other eating disorder diseases. soa natural?
The fashion industry normally encourage young girls to starve themselves in an attempt to meet the super model criteria of being skinny. It is common that some girls tend to put their fingers in their mouths and puke out all they have just had after a meal and this practice finally leads to anorexia and other eating disorder diseases. soa natural?
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2 mar 2016
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"...normally encourages young girls..."
"eating disorder diseases" sounds a bit redundant. You can just say "eating disorders."
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"...normally encourages young girls..."
"eating disorder diseases" sounds a bit redundant. You can just say "eating disorders."
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