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9 mai 2017
- Português (Brasil)
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Inglês (EUA)
Pergunta sobre Inglês (EUA)
I traded in my Xbox one for my friend's PS4, and gave him another $50 to close the deal. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included.
or
I traded in my Xbox one plus $50 for my friend's PS4. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included.
or
I exchanged my Xbox one for my friend's PS4 and gave him another $50 to close the deal. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included. soa natural?
I traded in my Xbox one for my friend's PS4, and gave him another $50 to close the deal. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included.
or
I traded in my Xbox one plus $50 for my friend's PS4. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included.
or
I exchanged my Xbox one for my friend's PS4 and gave him another $50 to close the deal. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included. soa natural?
or
I traded in my Xbox one plus $50 for my friend's PS4. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included.
or
I exchanged my Xbox one for my friend's PS4 and gave him another $50 to close the deal. In the end, I came out winning since the PS4 is new and came with 2 games included. soa natural?
Which sentence is correct? Can you make it sound more natural?
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9 mai 2017
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- Inglês (EUA)
Natural
@Eduardoakaedu Maybe try this
" I traded my Xbox One to my friend and payed them an additional $50 for their PS4. I got the PS4 for a good deal, because it is new and it came with two games."
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- Inglês (EUA)
Natural
Your second entry sounds much more natural than the others to me.
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- Português (Brasil)
@marinaholden94 Is there a more natural way of saying that sentence? Thanks for helping me.
- Inglês (EUA)
Natural
They all sound really good to me. I'd probably use "seal the deal" instead of "close" but that's mostly personal preference.
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- Inglês (EUA)
Natural
@Eduardoakaedu Maybe try this
" I traded my Xbox One to my friend and payed them an additional $50 for their PS4. I got the PS4 for a good deal, because it is new and it came with two games."
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