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15 abr 2017
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And we successfully detected three antifungal metabolites and two antibacterial metabolites in the culture supernatant by mass spectrometry, demonstrating that these corresponding gene clusters in strain LM2303 are functional. While other metabolites that were not detected may need to change the culture condition or assay method.
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And we successfully detected three antifungal metabolites and two antibacterial metabolites in the culture supernatant by mass spectrometry, demonstrating that these corresponding gene clusters in strain LM2303 are functional. While other metabolites that were not detected may need to change the culture condition or assay method.
Any improperly?
Any improperly?
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- País ou região ESTADOS UNIDOS
@gostraight I think this would be better
We also successfully detected three antifungal metabolites and two antibacterial metabolites in the culture supernatant by using mass spectrometry. With that we can demonstrate that these corresponding gene clusters in strain LM2303 are functional. While other metabolites that were not detected may need to change the culture condition or assay other methods.
Also props to using such diverse vocabulary! I don't know what this is for, but it sounds cool!
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Additionally, three antifungal metabolites and two antibacterial metabolites were successfully detected in the culture supernatant through mass spectrometry, demonstrating that the corresponding gene clusters in the LM2303 strain are functional. For other undetected metabolites the culture conditions or assay method may have to be changed.
I changed it a bit to avoid the usage of "we". In scientific articles you should avoid the usage of first and second person and stick to passive writing. At least that is how I was taught. Apart from that it was very well written and easy to understand. 😉
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- País ou região PORTUGAL
@gostraight Moreover is also fine. You could also put "also" between "were" and "successfully".
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@Manuel137 please examine this sentence.
'Antimicrobial metabolites biosynthesis of LM was confirmed by biochemical analysis, and its plant growth-promoting traits was confirmed by inoculation tests.'
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'Antimicrobial metabolites biosynthesis of LM was confirmed by biochemical analysis, and its plant growth-promoting traits was confirmed by inoculation tests.'
any improperly?
- País ou região PORTUGAL
@gostraight
Biosynthesis of antimicrobial metabolites was confirmed in LM by biochemical analysis, while its plant growth promoting traits were confirmed by inoculation tests.
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@Manuel137 are you here? how about my sentence below?
3,454 bp high-quality data were generated and then de novo assembled into a circular contig.
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3,454 bp high-quality data were generated and then de novo assembled into a circular contig.
any improperly?
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@gostraight Data is plural for datum but I generally see "data was generated" so I'm not sure (I guess data is used as a collective entity). Was would sound better to me but I think both would be correct.
The sentence seems fine by me.
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@Manuel137 thanks, how about this one?
To classify it, the orthologous genes were generated using Ortho 2.3 by comparison with closely related genomes, and a Neighbor-Joining phylogenic tree was constructed based on the matrices of single-copy core genes using Nei model by ME 17.0.
To classify it, the orthologous genes were generated using Ortho 2.3 by comparison with closely related genomes, and a Neighbor-Joining phylogenic tree was constructed based on the matrices of single-copy core genes using Nei model by ME 17.0.
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