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When you reach a certain age you start to notice how quickly the years go by. You feel pressured to have your life already figured out, And you keep hating and fighting with yourself over those wasted years in your past life, And you just hoping that you didn't live those years in vain but wishing to lead you to the path that you always ached for.
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For the most part but there are too many commas. That last sentence doesn't make sense though.
When you reach a certain age you start to notice how quickly the years go by. You can feel pressured to have your life already figured out, and you keep hating and fighting with yourself over those wasted years in your past life. You just have to hope that you didn't live those years in vain and that your life led you to the path that you always ached for.
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- Castelhano (Espanha)
"but wishing to lead you to the path that you always ached for."
- Castelhano (Espanha)
I changed it to what I thought you were trying to say. That sentence doesn't make sense so I'm not sure what you are trying to say. Are you talking about the years before or the years you have left? If you get rid of the word "wishing to" it would make sense.
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