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Could you please help with my writing?🏵️
I’d like to make them sound as casual and natural as possible !!
Please, please help me !
How do you say them?
1.I’ve craved chocolate for two days and I tried to ignore it, but the cravings wouldn’t go away. They kept coming to my mind and clouded my thought. Finally, I surrender to the temptation and shoved the bar of chocolate into my mouth. It was unbearably delectable.
2.It’s the last day of my holiday and I’ll have to go back to work tomorrow. What a life.
3.I’m not a big fan of cold-weather. I’m waiting for the spring.
4.All I want to do is crawl into my bed and watch YouTube videos.
I’d like to make them sound as casual and natural as possible !!
Please, please help me !
How do you say them?
1.I’ve craved chocolate for two days and I tried to ignore it, but the cravings wouldn’t go away. They kept coming to my mind and clouded my thought. Finally, I surrender to the temptation and shoved the bar of chocolate into my mouth. It was unbearably delectable.
2.It’s the last day of my holiday and I’ll have to go back to work tomorrow. What a life.
3.I’m not a big fan of cold-weather. I’m waiting for the spring.
4.All I want to do is crawl into my bed and watch YouTube videos.
- Inglês (EUA)
- Khmer
1. I’ve been craving chocolate for two days and I’ve tried to ignore the craving but they wouldn’t go away. I couldn’t think about anything other than chocolate. I finally surrendered to the temptation and shoved a bar chocolate into my mouth. It was so good. (you can say unbearably delectable to be formal but not many people use ‘delectable’ some won’t even know what it means)
2. (This one sounds natural)
3. (Also sounds natural. but make it “I’m waiting for spring” you don’t need ‘the’)
4. All I want to do is crawl onto my bed and watch YouTube videos.
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