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Sakurajima erupted on Sunday night.
The alert level was raised to 5.
Several ten’s local people evacuated immediately.
I visited there several years ago.
I went there on a car ferry and trekked a path surrounded by lava.
It was a very peaceful town.
While staying in Kagoshima, I sometimes saw volcanic smoke.
Depending on the direction
of the wind, The vovani ash reached a wide area in Kagoshima.

Sakurajima erupted on Sunday night.
The alert level was raised to 5.
Several ten’s local people evacuated immediately.
I visited there several years ago.
I went there on a car ferry and trekked a path surrounded by lava.
It was a very peaceful town.
While staying in Kagoshima, I sometimes saw volcanic smoke.
Depending on the direction
of the wind, The vovani ash reached a wide area in Kagoshima.

Your writing sounds natural! Just a few corrections:
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→ Dozens of local people evacuated immediately.
or
→ Several dozen local people evacuated immediately.
→ Depending on the direction of the wind, the volcanic ash reached a wide area in Kagoshima.
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Your writing sounds natural! Just a few corrections:
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→ Dozens of local people evacuated immediately.
or
→ Several dozen local people evacuated immediately.
→ Depending on the direction of the wind, the volcanic ash reached a wide area in Kagoshima.
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