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19 mar 2022
- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
Pergunta sobre Inglês (EUA)
It would be helpful if you revise my sentence below.
“Traveling to Japan.”
It doesn’t hurt that you would come to Japan.Japan have many stuff that attract you.
For instance, first of all, Japanese history is unique for its geographical reason(Japan is an island, surrounded by sea.).
Have you ever heard Samurai, Ninja and Shinto? They are some of typical Japanese cultures.
Secondly, Japan has pop cultures like anime and manga.
I don’t know why they have been so developed in Japan, but I would say Japanese anime and manga is No.1 all over the world.
At last, Japan is relatively a safe country. You can stay comfortable. Actually, it’s getting worse these days. But it’s still safe here.
Let’s go with Japan if you consider traveling overseas. Making yourself enjoy thrilling and peaceful travel!!
It would be helpful if you revise my sentence below.
“Traveling to Japan.”
It doesn’t hurt that you would come to Japan.Japan have many stuff that attract you.
For instance, first of all, Japanese history is unique for its geographical reason(Japan is an island, surrounded by sea.).
Have you ever heard Samurai, Ninja and Shinto? They are some of typical Japanese cultures.
Secondly, Japan has pop cultures like anime and manga.
I don’t know why they have been so developed in Japan, but I would say Japanese anime and manga is No.1 all over the world.
At last, Japan is relatively a safe country. You can stay comfortable. Actually, it’s getting worse these days. But it’s still safe here.
Let’s go with Japan if you consider traveling overseas. Making yourself enjoy thrilling and peaceful travel!!
“Traveling to Japan.”
It doesn’t hurt that you would come to Japan.Japan have many stuff that attract you.
For instance, first of all, Japanese history is unique for its geographical reason(Japan is an island, surrounded by sea.).
Have you ever heard Samurai, Ninja and Shinto? They are some of typical Japanese cultures.
Secondly, Japan has pop cultures like anime and manga.
I don’t know why they have been so developed in Japan, but I would say Japanese anime and manga is No.1 all over the world.
At last, Japan is relatively a safe country. You can stay comfortable. Actually, it’s getting worse these days. But it’s still safe here.
Let’s go with Japan if you consider traveling overseas. Making yourself enjoy thrilling and peaceful travel!!
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- Inglês (EUA)
1 - It doesn't hurt if would come to Japan. Japan has many stuff that would attract you.
2 - (For an instance/first of all), Japanese history is unique for its geographical reason. ... Have you ever heard of Samurai, Ninja or Shinto? They are some examples of Japanese cultures.
3 - Lets go to Japan if you ever consider travelling overseas. Make yourself enjoy thrills and have a peaceful travel!!!
- Japonês

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