- ChinĂȘs Tradicional (Taiwan)
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InglĂȘs (EUA)
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ChinĂȘs Tradicional (Taiwan)
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Would you please check my sentences, I hope they sound natural for English native speakers, thanks in advanceđđââïž
When I want to lose weight, I will try to go to the nearby Civic Sports Center on weekends. The cost is only 50 yuan per hour. The sports equipment there is very diverse, such as treadmills. There are even swimming pools, basketball courts and tennis courts. You can also use the free shower room after exercise.
When I want to lose weight, I will try to go to the nearby Civic Sports Center on weekends. The cost is only 50 yuan per hour. The sports equipment there is very diverse, such as treadmills. There are even swimming pools, basketball courts and tennis courts. You can also use the free shower room after exercise.
- InglĂȘs (EUA)
- ChinĂȘs Tradicional (Hong Kong)
The second sentence could be changed to "It only costs 50 yuan per hour". We usually don't use "diverse" to describe equipment. The phrase "The sports equipment there is very diverse" could be changed to "There are many types of sports equipment". The rest of the paragraph seems good to me. Hope that helps!
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- InglĂȘs (EUA)
- ChinĂȘs Tradicional (Hong Kong)
The second sentence could be changed to "It only costs 50 yuan per hour". We usually don't use "diverse" to describe equipment. The phrase "The sports equipment there is very diverse" could be changed to "There are many types of sports equipment". The rest of the paragraph seems good to me. Hope that helps!
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