( Replying to an email from my teacher )
Is my English in my response correct and polite enough?

<From my teacher>
I've been very late at responding to emails, but I've enjoyed viewing your wonderful work!

I'm currently looking for a great VFX studio to do work on a feature film. If you have any recommendations, please let me know. On my side, if I can recommend you to a studio for this particular project, I will.

<My response>
Thank you so much for your email and check out my resume and reels! Actually, I updated my resume since I sent you the last email, so I'm glad if you could use my attached resume if there's any chance.
Regarding a VFX studio, I'll let you know as soon as possible if I find out anything. Also, thank you so much for your kind consideration!
Also, I wanted to let you know that I had a job interview last week, and I'm going to start an apprenticeship program at a post production sound studio called (company name). Again, thank you for your help always!

Question

( Replying to an email from my teacher )
Is my English in my response correct and polite enough?

<From my teacher>
I've been very late at responding to emails, but I've enjoyed viewing your wonderful work!

I'm currently looking for a great VFX studio to do work on a feature film. If you have any recommendations, please let me know. On my side, if I can recommend you to a studio for this particular project, I will.

<My response>
Thank you so much for your email and check out my resume and reels! Actually, I updated my resume since I sent you the last email, so I'm glad if you could use my attached resume if there's any chance.
Regarding a VFX studio, I'll let you know as soon as possible if I find out anything. Also, thank you so much for your kind consideration!
Also, I wanted to let you know that I had a job interview last week, and I'm going to start an apprenticeship program at a post production sound studio called (company name). Again, thank you for your help always!

rtizisland · Answer

Thank you so much for your email and for checking out my resume and reels! Actually, I’ve updated my resume since I last emailed you, so I would be glad if you could, by chance, use my attached resume. Regarding an VFX studio, I’ll let you know as soon as possible if I find anything out. Also, thank you so much for your kind consideration! One other thing, I wanted to let you know that I had a job interview last week, and that I’m going to be starting an apprenticeship program at a post production sound studio called (company name). Again, thank you for your help as always!

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