- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
About a sake brand : I would like you to correct my sentences to more natural English please.
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I introduce a sake brand for beginner.
If you are a beginner of drinking sake, a sake brand _____ is good for you.
It has really smooth light taste but tasty. At the risk of being misunderstood, it tastes like water.
Its fruity flavor is like high quality water melon. Although, the ingredient has no fruits.
_____ is a bland name and has several types of sake. It would be confusing when you buy this sake.
So, when you find this name on the bottle label, please check what type is such as sparkling, vintage, some quality levels. soa natural?
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I introduce a sake brand for beginner.
If you are a beginner of drinking sake, a sake brand _____ is good for you.
It has really smooth light taste but tasty. At the risk of being misunderstood, it tastes like water.
Its fruity flavor is like high quality water melon. Although, the ingredient has no fruits.
_____ is a bland name and has several types of sake. It would be confusing when you buy this sake.
So, when you find this name on the bottle label, please check what type is such as sparkling, vintage, some quality levels. soa natural?
- Inglês (RU)
- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
This would be better:
I'll show you a sake brand for beginners.
If you are new to drinking sake, a sake brand called _____ would be best for you.
It has really smooth light taste but is still very tasty. It is sometimes said to taste like water.
Its fruity flavor is similar to watermelon. Although, the ingredients don't include any fruits.
_____ is a brand name and has several types of sake. It can be confusing when you buy this sake.
So, when you find this name on the bottle label, please check what type it is, such as sparkling, vintage, some quality levels.
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- Chinês Tradicional (Taiwan)
- Inglês (RU)
- Inglês (EUA)
Um pouco artificial
This would be better:
I'll show you a sake brand for beginners.
If you are new to drinking sake, a sake brand called _____ would be best for you.
It has really smooth light taste but is still very tasty. It is sometimes said to taste like water.
Its fruity flavor is similar to watermelon. Although, the ingredients don't include any fruits.
_____ is a brand name and has several types of sake. It can be confusing when you buy this sake.
So, when you find this name on the bottle label, please check what type it is, such as sparkling, vintage, some quality levels.
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- Árabe
- Japonês
Hello, killvmaim.
You perfectly understood what I had wanted to say.
I will learn and use the corrected ones when I talk about the sake with international tourists.
You are a great teacher, thank you so much!
Com a HiNative, você pode ter sua escrita corrigida por falantes nativos gratuitamente ✍️✨.
- O que significa for its own sake ?
- Mostra-me frases de exemplo com sake.
- O que significa for the sake of consistency?
Que símbolo é este?
O símbolo de Nível de Língua apresenta a tua proficiência na língua na qual estás interessado. Definir o Nível de Língua ajuda os utilizadores a escrever respostas de fácil compreensão.
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Iniciante
Dificuldade em compreender respostas a perguntas na língua indicada.
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Iniciante-Intermediário
Capaz de fazer perguntas simples. Compreende respostas simples.
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Intermediário
Capaz de fazer todo o tipo de perguntas gerais. Capaz de compreender respostas longas.
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Avançado
Capaz de compreender respostas longas e complexas.
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