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Please be strict with the corrections :)
Is this natural? What can I do to make my sentences better?
1) As the world population has grown, resources on Earth have disappeared.
2) More resources for humans are already used than we can continue to produce.
3) With our current consumption, we are likely to deplete the worldwide fossil fuels, wildlife areas, and in turn, food supply.
Is this natural? What can I do to make my sentences better?
1) As the world population has grown, resources on Earth have disappeared.
2) More resources for humans are already used than we can continue to produce.
3) With our current consumption, we are likely to deplete the worldwide fossil fuels, wildlife areas, and in turn, food supply.
- Inglês (EUA) Quase Fluente
@KZK7
“In turn” are referring to actions that affect other, and so on and “in return” is exchanging or affect of a cause.
So “in turn” is correct
Also sorry for my mistake with my first comment, not even my school taught me that “In turn” can be used correctly in sentences like these.
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- Inglês (EUA) Quase Fluente
When you put “in turn”, did you mean “in return”(basically saying the affect of that cause)? Overall, it sounds natural!
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- Japonês
Thank you!!
Yes, I thought this means "as a result".
What is the difference between 'in tern' and 'in return'?
And in this context, which is better?
- Inglês (EUA) Quase Fluente
@KZK7
“In turn” are referring to actions that affect other, and so on and “in return” is exchanging or affect of a cause.
So “in turn” is correct
Also sorry for my mistake with my first comment, not even my school taught me that “In turn” can be used correctly in sentences like these.
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- Japonês
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