‎Please fix my sentences
3.11

Do you know what was happened ten years ago in Japan. Sometimes we talk about what we did on March 11 ,2011 when we look back this earthquake. In my case, I was in junior high school. I was at home with my mom and younger brother and we watched TV. We lived in Shizuoka which is not close to the location of the center of the earthquake. So I didn’t expect the earthquake was big accident. My younger brother was younger so he went to under the table when it was happened. My mom and I just stayed on the couch then. For several months, we could watch only news of the earthquake on TV. We didn’t watch some drama, varsity or something like that. In my city, we did take place graduation ceremony and entrance ceremony but it depends on city they didn’t take place them anymore. It’s been for ten years, I’m grown up so I take this happen more seriously. We never know when and where earthquake might happen.

Thank you for reading 📖

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‎Please fix my sentences 
3.11

Do you know what was happened ten years ago in Japan. Sometimes we talk about what we did on March 11 ,2011 when we look back this earthquake. In my case, I was in junior high school. I was at home with my mom and younger brother and we watched TV. We lived in Shizuoka which is not close to the location of the center of the earthquake. So I didn’t expect the earthquake was big accident. My younger brother was younger so he went to under the table when it was happened. My mom and I just stayed on the couch then. For several months, we could watch only news of the earthquake on TV. We didn’t watch some drama, varsity or something like that. In my city, we did take place graduation ceremony and entrance ceremony but it depends on city they didn’t take place them anymore. It’s been for ten years, I’m grown up so I take this happen more seriously. We never know when and where earthquake might happen.

Thank you for reading 📖

Kbh_0021 · Answer

Do you know what happened ten years ago in Japan? Sometimes we talk about what we did on March 11 ,2011 when we look back to this earthquake. In my case, I was in junior high school. I was at home with my mom and younger brother and we watched TV. We lived in Shizuoka which is far from the location of the center of the earthquake. So I didn’t expect the earthquake to be a big accident. My younger brother was young at that time so he went under the table when it happened. My mom and I just stayed on the couch then. For several months, we could only watch news about the earthquake on TV. We didn’t watch drama, varsity or something like that. In my city, we took the graduation ceremony and entrance ceremony but it depends on the city they didn’t take place them anymore. It’s been ten years, I’m grown up so I take this more seriously. We never know when and where earthquake might happen.

This still has a few mistakes but I made it accurate:)

This still has a few mistakes but I made it accurate:)

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