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12 mar 2021
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"Yesterday was the 10th anniversary of the Great East Japan Earthquake. There were a lot of special programs broadcast on TV about that. I learned that there are still a lot of people missing. I’m sure all of them must have died in the earthquake and tsunami. I pray that their dead bodies will be found and returned to their family members as soon as possible. "
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"Yesterday was the 10th anniversary of the Great East Japan Earthquake. There were a lot of special programs broadcast on TV about that. I learned that there are still a lot of people missing. I’m sure all of them must have died in the earthquake and tsunami. I pray that their dead bodies will be found and returned to their family members as soon as possible. "
Hello! Do you think the passage above sounds ok? Thank you!
Hello! Do you think the passage above sounds ok? Thank you!
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- Inglês (EUA)
It is all correct, but you could try using different sentence structures.
e.g.: (corrections are shown with //__//)
"Yesterday was the 10th anniversary of the Great East Japan Earthquake. There were a lot of special programs broadcast on TV about //it//. I learned that there are still a lot of people missing//;// I’m sure all of them must have died in the earthquake and tsunami. I pray that their dead bodies will be found and returned to their family members as soon as possible. "
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- Inglês (EUA)
It is all correct, but you could try using different sentence structures.
e.g.: (corrections are shown with //__//)
"Yesterday was the 10th anniversary of the Great East Japan Earthquake. There were a lot of special programs broadcast on TV about //it//. I learned that there are still a lot of people missing//;// I’m sure all of them must have died in the earthquake and tsunami. I pray that their dead bodies will be found and returned to their family members as soon as possible. "
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You could also just say 'bodies' instead of 'dead bodies' - 'dead bodies' is correct but sounds a little morbid for general discussion purposes
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@morninggloryog Thank you so much for the detailed feedback. I really appreciate it. I learned a lot. Arigato!
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