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6 mar 2021
- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
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Pergunta sobre Inglês (EUA)
Please correct this conversation and make it more natural.
A: Do you have any recommendations for a sightseeing place in Kanagawa?
B: I recommend Kamakura. There are a lot of shrines and temples, and my recommendations of them are the Koutokuin temple and the Tsuruoka Hachimanguu shrine. Koutokuin temple has a big Budha, and you will be breathtaking. Tsuruoka Hacimanguu shrine is an origin of Kamakura culture, and you can feel a theme of Japanese tradition. Also, there is a Komachi street nearby the shrine. There are various shops selling souvenirs, sweets, and foods side by side on the street.
A: What's your favorite shop on the street?
B: It's a tough question, but my favorite shop is the souvenir shop, named Mameya, which is selling a variety of dry-roasted beans. The dry-roasted bean is a traditional Japanese food, so it's the best souvenir.
Please correct this conversation and make it more natural.
A: Do you have any recommendations for a sightseeing place in Kanagawa?
B: I recommend Kamakura. There are a lot of shrines and temples, and my recommendations of them are the Koutokuin temple and the Tsuruoka Hachimanguu shrine. Koutokuin temple has a big Budha, and you will be breathtaking. Tsuruoka Hacimanguu shrine is an origin of Kamakura culture, and you can feel a theme of Japanese tradition. Also, there is a Komachi street nearby the shrine. There are various shops selling souvenirs, sweets, and foods side by side on the street.
A: What's your favorite shop on the street?
B: It's a tough question, but my favorite shop is the souvenir shop, named Mameya, which is selling a variety of dry-roasted beans. The dry-roasted bean is a traditional Japanese food, so it's the best souvenir.
A: Do you have any recommendations for a sightseeing place in Kanagawa?
B: I recommend Kamakura. There are a lot of shrines and temples, and my recommendations of them are the Koutokuin temple and the Tsuruoka Hachimanguu shrine. Koutokuin temple has a big Budha, and you will be breathtaking. Tsuruoka Hacimanguu shrine is an origin of Kamakura culture, and you can feel a theme of Japanese tradition. Also, there is a Komachi street nearby the shrine. There are various shops selling souvenirs, sweets, and foods side by side on the street.
A: What's your favorite shop on the street?
B: It's a tough question, but my favorite shop is the souvenir shop, named Mameya, which is selling a variety of dry-roasted beans. The dry-roasted bean is a traditional Japanese food, so it's the best souvenir.
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6 mar 2021
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- Inglês (EUA)
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A: Do you have any recommendations for sightseeing in Kanagawa?
B: I recommend Kamakura. There are a lot of shrines and temples. I recommend the Koutokuin temple and the Tsuruoka Hachimanguu shrine. Koutokuin temple has a big breathtaking Budha. Tsuruoka Hacimanguu shrine is an origin of Kamakura culture and you can feel a theme of Japanese tradition. Also, there is a Komachi street near the shrine. There are various shops selling souvenirs, sweets, and food side by side on the street.
A: What's your favorite shop on the street?
B: It's a tough question, but my favorite shop is the souvenir shop named Mameya which sells variety of dry-roasted beans. The dry-roasted bean is a traditional Japanese food so it's the best souvenir.

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