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Atualizado em
12 fev 2017
- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
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Inglês (RU)
Pergunta sobre Inglês (EUA)
"I would like to visit Otawa. I have two reasons to say so.
Firstly, I like to visit cold place because I like snow.
Secondly, I heard Canada is as safe as Japan so there is really
good for jepanese people.
From these two reasons, I want to visit Otawa." soa natural?
"I would like to visit Otawa. I have two reasons to say so.
Firstly, I like to visit cold place because I like snow.
Secondly, I heard Canada is as safe as Japan so there is really
good for jepanese people.
From these two reasons, I want to visit Otawa." soa natural?
Firstly, I like to visit cold place because I like snow.
Secondly, I heard Canada is as safe as Japan so there is really
good for jepanese people.
From these two reasons, I want to visit Otawa." soa natural?
This is practice for my entrance exam.So please criticize in detail.
question:Choose a foreign city that you would like to visit anywhere in the world, and explain why you would like to visit that city.(About 50 words)
question:Choose a foreign city that you would like to visit anywhere in the world, and explain why you would like to visit that city.(About 50 words)
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Árabe
Um pouco artificial
I think you can give more logical reasons.
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- Japonês
How about this?
I would like to visit Ottawa. I have two reasons to say so.
First of all, I want to study both English and French and there I can listen to the both.
Secondly, I have talked with a man from Ottawa on the Internet and I've been interested in there since then.
I would like to visit Ottawa. I have two reasons to say so.
First of all, I want to study both English and French and there I can listen to the both.
Secondly, I have talked with a man from Ottawa on the Internet and I've been interested in there since then.
- Inglês (EUA)
- Árabe
Um pouco artificial
Yeah this sounds better than the first one. 👏🏻
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