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- Castelhano (Espanha)
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On the other hand, the downside, This video shown us, how cities like NY due to incresinglying population with too many buildings that attract solar radiations, and the poor sanitations in the eighteenth century and above all the lack of trees in their streets, they create a parais of bacterians suchs a cholera to name but a few. it is important to make sure that we build a cities plenty of trees to be tackle this problem, I strongly suggest we made similar proyect as Cophenhage, they have made a plan call five fingers, to put forward a cities plenty of trees and rich faune of animals
Please, Could you correct and improve this sentence? Thank you.
On the other hand, the downside, This video shown us, how cities like NY due to incresinglying population with too many buildings that attract solar radiations, and the poor sanitations in the eighteenth century and above all the lack of trees in their streets, they create a parais of bacterians suchs a cholera to name but a few. it is important to make sure that we build a cities plenty of trees to be tackle this problem, I strongly suggest we made similar proyect as Cophenhage, they have made a plan call five fingers, to put forward a cities plenty of trees and rich faune of animals
On the other hand, the downside, This video shown us, how cities like NY due to incresinglying population with too many buildings that attract solar radiations, and the poor sanitations in the eighteenth century and above all the lack of trees in their streets, they create a parais of bacterians suchs a cholera to name but a few. it is important to make sure that we build a cities plenty of trees to be tackle this problem, I strongly suggest we made similar proyect as Cophenhage, they have made a plan call five fingers, to put forward a cities plenty of trees and rich faune of animals
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On the other hand, the downside, as this video has shown us, is the incidence of bacterial diseases such as cholera in cities like New York. This occurs due to increasing population, the abundance of buildings which attracts solar radiation, poor sanitation in the eighteenth century and above all, the lack of trees on the streets. It is important to make sure that we plant plenty of trees in cities to tackle this problem. I strongly suggest we start a project similar to the one in Copenhagen, called "five fingers," which aims to create a city with plenty of trees and a diverse population of animals.
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On the other hand, the downside, as this video has shown us, is the incidence of bacterial diseases such as cholera in cities like New York. This occurs due to increasing population, the abundance of buildings which attracts solar radiation, poor sanitation in the eighteenth century and above all, the lack of trees on the streets. It is important to make sure that we plant plenty of trees in cities to tackle this problem. I strongly suggest we start a project similar to the one in Copenhagen, called "five fingers," which aims to create a city with plenty of trees and a diverse population of animals.
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