@tyrellahart 昨日も添削してもらったのに申し訳ですが、この時の使い方は当たっていますか？添削お願いします☺️
Travel tour is good for this island. But if I live in this island, I feel a little lonely.
But I'm live in this island and this way. Let's try our best! I want to use it to send myself a message.

旅行で来るならこの島は良い。だが私が住むとなると少し寂しい。
でもこの島で生きこの道を行く。だからベストを尽くしたい。私に送るメッセージです。

tyrellahart

6 fev 2017

Inglês (EUA)

This island is good when you come by trip. Although, I feel a little lonely living here.
But I live on this island and go this way(?) . So I want to do my best. It's a message to myself.

That's as good of a correction as I can give, sorry, でもあなたの英語は上手ですね。大丈夫ですか？気をつけってください！

Saoy

6 fev 2017

Japonês

@tyrellahart Thank you. I'm glad. Hinative chack is also Unnatural or a little natural. I am sometimes depressed. But I'm never give up! I Want to study hard. So I can speak English very well. お互いに勉強頑張りましょうね！日本語の勉強頑張ってください！