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Dear Daniel,
about one week ago, I watched a movie called Safe Haven. It is written by Nicholas Sparks and was produced in 2003. It's a drama - romance about a girl who runs away from her abusive hosband. She moves to Southport where she meets a nice single dad, with whom she falls in love but her husband won’t stop looking for her. I really like this movie because it’s thrilling from beginning to the end and l would highly recommend it.
I wish you all the best,
Ana
It would be great to get some feedback of my text. Feel free for any advices or any improvements
Thank you already :)
Dear Daniel,
about one week ago, I watched a movie called Safe Haven. It is written by Nicholas Sparks and was produced in 2003. It's a drama - romance about a girl who runs away from her abusive hosband. She moves to Southport where she meets a nice single dad, with whom she falls in love but her husband won’t stop looking for her. I really like this movie because it’s thrilling from beginning to the end and l would highly recommend it.
I wish you all the best,
Ana
- Inglês (RU)
You have spelt 'husband' wrong, and the sentence "with whom she falls in love" personally, i would put 'with whom she falls in love with' but the way you have it now does make sense. Overall you did a really great job👍🏻
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