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11 jun 2020
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InglĂȘs (EUA)
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Weed
When I was in Canada, I smoked a weed in the first time. What never smoked it even a cigarette. At first time, I was different to smoke it. My friend taught me how to smoke. After about 10 minutes, I got feeling high and could enjoy everything. I smoked it with friends. When I smoke it, l donât know why,I canât speak English. If I get feeling high by weed, I can not stop laughing , think and stop eating. Itâs like a buzzed.
One day, I smoked it and ate a cookie with weed. I got feeling bad. I thought, I was almost died and couldnât stop moving and threw up in the washroom . I had been moving my leg and hand forever. I never want to go back to that day. I was in close to Niagara Falls but I couldnât see it at that time. Now, I got used to smoke it but I donât want to do alone and every day.
Thank you đ
Please make sure sentencesđ„șđ„ș
Weed
When I was in Canada, I smoked a weed in the first time. What never smoked it even a cigarette. At first time, I was different to smoke it. My friend taught me how to smoke. After about 10 minutes, I got feeling high and could enjoy everything. I smoked it with friends. When I smoke it, l donât know why,I canât speak English. If I get feeling high by weed, I can not stop laughing , think and stop eating. Itâs like a buzzed.
One day, I smoked it and ate a cookie with weed. I got feeling bad. I thought, I was almost died and couldnât stop moving and threw up in the washroom . I had been moving my leg and hand forever. I never want to go back to that day. I was in close to Niagara Falls but I couldnât see it at that time. Now, I got used to smoke it but I donât want to do alone and every day.
Thank you đ
Weed
When I was in Canada, I smoked a weed in the first time. What never smoked it even a cigarette. At first time, I was different to smoke it. My friend taught me how to smoke. After about 10 minutes, I got feeling high and could enjoy everything. I smoked it with friends. When I smoke it, l donât know why,I canât speak English. If I get feeling high by weed, I can not stop laughing , think and stop eating. Itâs like a buzzed.
One day, I smoked it and ate a cookie with weed. I got feeling bad. I thought, I was almost died and couldnât stop moving and threw up in the washroom . I had been moving my leg and hand forever. I never want to go back to that day. I was in close to Niagara Falls but I couldnât see it at that time. Now, I got used to smoke it but I donât want to do alone and every day.
Thank you đ
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Please *check my* sentencesđ„șđ„ș
Weed
When I was in Canada, I smoked a weed *for* the first time. *I had never even smoked a cigarette*. *At first*, I *didn't know how to smoke*. My friend taught me how to smoke. After about 10 minutes, *I got high* and *started to* enjoy everything. I *smoked* with friends. When I *smoke*, l donât know why, I canât speak English. If I *get high using* weed, I can not stop laughing, *thinking or* eating. Itâs like *I am* buzzed.
One day, I *smoked* and ate a cookie with weed. I got *a bad feeling*. *I thought I was going to die* and couldnât stop moving and threw up in the washroom. I *couldn't stop constantly* moving my legs* and hands*. I never want to go back to that day. I *was close* to Niagara Falls but I couldnât see it at that time. Now, I got used to *smoking* it but I donât want to do *it* alone *or* every day.
Thank you đ
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