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17 mai 2020
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Please check my journal!
If there are mistakes, could you revise them？
“Things which make me happy”
I found “Sesame Street Channel ” on YouTube. As you know, that animation is very famous. When I was a child, I used to watch them on TV. However, I’ve thought they were made for children, so I’ve not watched them for a long time.
Today, I happened to watch one of them and I realized how cute their characters were again. The short movie made me warm. Although I had a occurrence like I felt down today, I got energy from it. The single characters heeled me.
From tomorrow on, I’ll live my life to the fullest. Thank you, Sesame Street ！
Please check my journal!
If there are mistakes, could you revise them？
“Things which make me happy”
I found “Sesame Street Channel ” on YouTube. As you know, that animation is very famous. When I was a child, I used to watch them on TV. However, I’ve thought they were made for children, so I’ve not watched them for a long time.
Today, I happened to watch one of them and I realized how cute their characters were again. The short movie made me warm. Although I had a occurrence like I felt down today, I got energy from it. The single characters heeled me.
From tomorrow on, I’ll live my life to the fullest. Thank you, Sesame Street ！
If there are mistakes, could you revise them？
“Things which make me happy”
I found “Sesame Street Channel ” on YouTube. As you know, that animation is very famous. When I was a child, I used to watch them on TV. However, I’ve thought they were made for children, so I’ve not watched them for a long time.
Today, I happened to watch one of them and I realized how cute their characters were again. The short movie made me warm. Although I had a occurrence like I felt down today, I got energy from it. The single characters heeled me.
From tomorrow on, I’ll live my life to the fullest. Thank you, Sesame Street ！
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- Inglês (EUA)
“Things that make me happy”
I found “Sesame Street Channel ” on YouTube. As you know, that show is very famous. When I was a child, I used to watch it on TV. However, I thought it was only made for children, so I haven't watched it in a long time.
Today, I happened to watch one of the episodes and I realized how cute the characters were again. The episode made me feel warm inside. Although I felt down earlier today, I was able to cheer up by watching it. Each of the characters healed me.
From tomorrow on, I’ll live my life to the fullest. Thank you, Sesame Street ！
[ そのジャーナルエントリは本当にかわいいですよ！ ]
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- Japonês
Thank you for revising my journal again ✨
What is ジャーナルエントリ？
What is ジャーナルエントリ？
- Inglês (EUA)
- Japonês
Sorry, I even could not understand it😥Is that a business word？
- Inglês (EUA)
oh no... it's what you wrote, like a journal.
for example, one page/paragraph/passage in a journal = a journal entry
basically everytime you write in your journal, no matter how long or short, it is considered a journal entry
to be honest I didn't know how to really say it, and I'm not sure if it has a translation so I just put it in katakana 😅😅😅
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I got it！！Thank you for explaining it☺️
What is the difference between journal and journal entry ？
Journal is called “日記 (にっき)” in Japanese.
What is the difference between journal and journal entry ？
Journal is called “日記 (にっき)” in Japanese.
- Inglês (EUA)
@Nmomo you're welcome!
journal = the whole book
journal entry = each section that you write
for example
journal entry = what you wrote in your question^
journal = all of what you wrote in your journal as a whole
technically, you should actually say "please check my journal entry!", but us English speakers are lazy so we don't pay too much attention to small details like that 😁
however, "please check my journal" still makes complete sense
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Oh~I see！！😮
Then, you can call journal entry “日記（にっき）” in Japanese too！
I think they aren’t separated in Japanese.
I didn’t know that there are two ways to express “日記” in English.
It was good that I was able to know them!
Thank you 😊
Then, you can call journal entry “日記（にっき）” in Japanese too！
I think they aren’t separated in Japanese.
I didn’t know that there are two ways to express “日記” in English.
It was good that I was able to know them!
Thank you 😊
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@Nmomo ohhh I understand! Thank you~ I learned something too 😁
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