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11 mai 2020
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Please help me check this paragraph. I write about my father☺️
Please help me check this paragraph. I write about my father☺️
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- País ou região VIETNAME
I love my family but today I want to talk about my father. This year he nearly 50 years old. My dad’s face though sunburn but still see youthful. Eyes brights with dark eye brows. He has a straight along coconut nose. My father's mouth is fresh smile, good talking. He is straight, delicate, kind but sometimes he is also tempered. He works as a businessman at home, specifically he sells old motorbike. He is very passionate about motorcycle. At the weekend he go to cafe with his friends in the evening. On holidays he usually goes to temples and pagodas. He loves my mother so much and he always supported me.He was there with me in my hard times to guide me to motivate me to make me realise my responsibilities. I have many thoughts in my mind about him but I can’t put them in words. I can only feel them. I don't believe God but if he is there I will pray to him that give my parents long life and make them feel happy always.
- País ou região ESTADOS UNIDOS
I corrected as much as i could! I also isolated the sentence you might want to review. Your text is very sweet and sincere, keep it up! ^ - ^
I love my family but today I want to talk about my father. This year he is nearly 50 years old. My dad’s face, although sunburn, is still very youthful. His eyes are bright with dark eyebrows.
He has a straight, long (coconut? Not sure what you mean?) nose.
My father always has a fresh smile on his lips, and talks well. He is just, delicate, and kind but sometimes he is also has a bit of bad temper. He works as a businessman at home, and he sells old motorbike. He is very passionate about motorcycle.
During the weekend he goes to (the/a) cafe with his friends in the evening.
On holidays he usually goes to temples and pagodas. He loves my mother so much and he has always supported me.He was there with me in my hard times to guide me and to motivate me, to make me realise my responsibilities. I have many thoughts in my mind about him, but I can’t quite put them in words. I can only feel them. I don't believe God but if he is there I will pray to him that he gives my parents a long life and make them always feel happy.
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- País ou região ESTADOS UNIDOS
Your dad must be great. Have you shown this to him?
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