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I need to introduce my teacher.
I'm sure there's something wrong with your hard work.
Please correct it with perfect grammar and concise sentences.


It's long, so I'll write it down in the comments.

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I was always a student who struggled to express my personal interests when dealing with my homeroom teachers. I'm sure there was something I wanted to do. Maybe it was because I had low self-esteem. I was afraid someone would say, "You're doing this?" and I would stop believing in myself. Then, in my junior year of high school, I met my music teacher. I was the only student who majored in music at the liberal arts high school, so we quickly grew close. While chatting as friends, I told my teacher everything about my career, and she advised me not to care about what other people think and that I should trust myself. For a month, she did her best to help me. She gave me a lot of information about music education and encouraged me try for the music education department if my grades improved from that point on. I relied on her help and gradually grew confident in myself. If it weren't for her, I wouldn't be at this school. We still keep in touch. Thank you so much for considering it again, and I think she definitely deserves to be a teacher. She is my role model. I want to be a teacher who can influence a student's life like she did. I will always do my best!

*honest is very awkward. Are you a liar? Honest with yourself is better...but it is a little awkward. So I hope my translation is good.


*she deserves to be a teacher.*
I hope that's right, but I'm confused. Isn't she already a teacher?? *She deserves to be a teacher at this school" perhaps?? I didn't know what you are introducing your teacher to. A university? A school? Please fix this because I didn't know what to add.