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Hi Lisa!
Yesterday I tasted your apple pie recipe. Everyone said that it was the best apple pie they have ever eat. In gratiude, I'm sending recipe and description of my favorite food.
Pancakes are dish on tradicional american breakfast. All children loves it! My mam makes the best pancakes, and recently she thaught me how to make them.
Contrary to appearance it is vary simple and quick dish. First you mix together flour, sugar, baking powder and salt. Then, in another bowl, you combine cup milk with 2 eggs and less than half cap melted butter. The Last thing you have to do is cook our pancakes. That's all! We usually eat it with honey, maple syrup or jam. If you want, you can and to the douth some coca. I love the chocolate one!
It smells amazing and tasted like sweet cloud. It's vary fluffy! When I'm looking at this, this makes me hungry.
This dish is great if you want to start your day with something delicious!
Xoxo

Hi, Lisa!
Yesterday, I tried your apple pie recipe. Everyone said that it was the best apple pie they have ever eaten. I'd like to express my gratitude by sending you a recipe and a description of my favorite food.
Pancakes are a traditional meal for an American breakfast. All children love them! My mam (mom) makes the best pancakes, and recently, she taught me how to make them.
Despite its simple appearance, it is a very tasty and quick dish. First, you have to mix flour, sugar, baking powder and salt together. Then, in another bowl, you (have to) combine a cup of milk with 2 eggs and 1/3 of a cup of melted butter. The last thing you have to do is to cook (make) the pancakes. And that's it! We usually eat them with honey, maple syrup or jam. If you want, you can add some coca to the douth (dough?). I love the chocolate ones!
It smells amazing and tastes like a sweet cloud. It's very fluffy! I'm becoming hungry just by writing you about it.
This dish is great if you want to start your day with something delicious!
Xoxo

Thanks to the quarantine, I have a lot of free time, lol. Hope this helps. There still might be some mistakes, but I think corrected most of them.