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25 nov 2019
- JaponĂȘs
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InglĂȘs (EUA)
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Please correct my journal đ”
I got a delicious persimmon from my coworker.
I usually don't buy and eat it so I thought that how to abou eat it.
I will eat one as it and the other as a salad.
So I'm looking forward to eating it!
Please correct my journal đ”
I got a delicious persimmon from my coworker.
I usually don't buy and eat it so I thought that how to abou eat it.
I will eat one as it and the other as a salad.
So I'm looking forward to eating it!
I got a delicious persimmon from my coworker.
I usually don't buy and eat it so I thought that how to abou eat it.
I will eat one as it and the other as a salad.
So I'm looking forward to eating it!
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- InglĂȘs (EUA)
I got a delicious persimmon from my coworker.
I usually don't buy or eat them so I wondered how I should eat it.
I will eat one as it is and the other in a salad.
I'm very much looking forward to eating it!
- InglĂȘs (EUA)
- Italiano
I got two delicious persimmons from my coworker.
I usually don't buy or eat persimmons, but I decided to eat this one.
I will eat one as it, and Iâll put the other one in a salad.
I'm looking forward to eating them.
*You could replace âthemâ with âthe saladâ if thatâs what you meant.
*Also, if you only had one persimmon it would look like this:
I got a delicious persimmon from my coworker.
I usually don't buy or eat persimmons, but I decided to eat this one.
I will eat half of it as it is, and Iâll put the other half in a salad.
I'm looking forward to eating this persimmon.
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