I am putting this on my videos to get more sponsors for my tour..So please read this and let me know if it makes sense. If there are any unnatural parts, please figure them out. Thank you so much for your support!!

<Sponsors seeked>
I am telling the truths of a real Japanese woman’s life story without wearing a mask.
Once experiencing hikikomori (shut-in) and I had lost my way.
But comedy have saved my life and now I am sure “laughter is medicine”
And now I am sure I was born to be a comedian and become a bridge of countries through humor.
With great thanks to the world’s tomodachi for support to Japan when disasters, I would love to return with Japanese humor!

As long as I am in Japan, the chance to get notice from the world’s standup comedy scene is quite few. Through this challenge, I am making a breakthorough to my next stage.
I would appreciate if you could push my way with your suppport.

Return to sponsors (example) :
・Business promo video production ・Promotion of your company at venues ・Performance at your company’s events ・Mentioning in my sets ・Credit in my DVD ..etc

Question

I am putting this on my videos to get more sponsors for my tour..So please read this and let me know if it makes sense.  If there are any unnatural parts, please figure them out. Thank you so much for your support!!

<Sponsors seeked>
I am telling the truths of a real Japanese woman’s life story without wearing a mask.
Once experiencing hikikomori (shut-in) and I had lost my way.
But comedy have saved my life and now I am sure “laughter is medicine”
And now I am sure I was born to be a comedian and become a bridge of countries through humor.
With great thanks to the world’s tomodachi for support to Japan when disasters, I would love to return with Japanese humor! 

As long as I am in Japan, the chance to get notice from the world’s standup comedy scene is quite few. Through this challenge, I am making a breakthorough to my next stage.
I would appreciate if you could push my way with your suppport.

Return to sponsors (example) :
・Business promo video production ・Promotion of your company at venues ・Performance at your company’s events ・Mentioning in my sets ・Credit in my DVD ..etc

butterworth1885 · Answer

Hi Kilara! I just recently found out about you from the interview you did with Nobita on YouTube. What a coincidence!

I’d be more than happy to help you, but first I’d like to ask some clarifying questions for the sake of accuracy in my corrections.

≪I am telling the truths of a real Japanese woman’s life story without wearing a mask.≫
1. Is this part just the introduction for the rest of the short story of how you became a comedian? Or is it a short description of your comedy style?

2. By “disasters”, are you talking about natural disasters like the earthquake and tsunami of March 2011?

3. What exactly do you mean by “Through this challenge”?

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