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24 jun 2019
- Castelhano (México)
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Inglês (EUA)
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Hi guys, can you please help me correct these sentences? Thank you
* What I think it is of paramount importance for an athlete is a healthy diet.
* The reason why some people are cut out to become athletes is because they are endowed with physical characteristics.
* It is vitally important that sportsmen have control on their training as well as their diet.
* Many people have neither prowess for sports nor meet physical criteria to become athletes.
Hi guys, can you please help me correct these sentences? Thank you
* What I think it is of paramount importance for an athlete is a healthy diet.
* The reason why some people are cut out to become athletes is because they are endowed with physical characteristics.
* It is vitally important that sportsmen have control on their training as well as their diet.
* Many people have neither prowess for sports nor meet physical criteria to become athletes.
* What I think it is of paramount importance for an athlete is a healthy diet.
* The reason why some people are cut out to become athletes is because they are endowed with physical characteristics.
* It is vitally important that sportsmen have control on their training as well as their diet.
* Many people have neither prowess for sports nor meet physical criteria to become athletes.
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- Inglês (EUA)
1. Probably just say “I think a healthy diet is of paramount importance for an athlete”. It flows better and is clearer,
2. Drop the “why” again. Just say “the reason some”
3. “Control of” not “Control on”
4. Probably say “neither have the prowess” and “meet the physical”
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