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2 dez 2016
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Hello natives! Do me a favor and correct this for me. I want you to write it the you would say it naturally: Teachers do play a key role in this issue but at the end of the day it's up to the students whether they want to be helped or straight out refuse it by being irresponsible. Coordination is the key factor here. If teachers do their jobs well, students have to take responsibility as well. A teacher might be doing everything in his or her capacity even then many students just wouldn't respond to their efforts accordingly.
I, as a student, understand that change almost always comes from within and if I'm not willing to have big ambitions for myself and the drive to achieve them, then no form of human help can change that
Hello natives! Do me a favor and correct this for me. I want you to write it the you would say it naturally: Teachers do play a key role in this issue but at the end of the day it's up to the students whether they want to be helped or straight out refuse it by being irresponsible. Coordination is the key factor here. If teachers do their jobs well, students have to take responsibility as well. A teacher might be doing everything in his or her capacity even then many students just wouldn't respond to their efforts accordingly.
I, as a student, understand that change almost always comes from within and if I'm not willing to have big ambitions for myself and the drive to achieve them, then no form of human help can change that
I, as a student, understand that change almost always comes from within and if I'm not willing to have big ambitions for myself and the drive to achieve them, then no form of human help can change that
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2 dez 2016
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- Inglês (EUA)
While teachers do play a major role in the issue, it is essentially up to the students whether they accept help or refuse it. Coordination is a key factor, as if teachers conduct their work well, students will have the motivation to do well as well and take some responsibility. However, even if a teacher teaches well, certain students might not respond to the teaching method.
(To me it doesn't feel as though the word 'coordination' belongs in this paragraph. I would change it to 'motive' or 'drive'.
If you want to use coordination you would need a different example. Say if 'the teacher and student are able to effectively manage their time, then a tutoring schedule could be worked out')
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- Inglês (EUA)
While teachers do play a major role in the issue, it is essentially up to the students whether they accept help or refuse it. Coordination is a key factor, as if teachers conduct their work well, students will have the motivation to do well as well and take some responsibility. However, even if a teacher teaches well, certain students might not respond to the teaching method.
(To me it doesn't feel as though the word 'coordination' belongs in this paragraph. I would change it to 'motive' or 'drive'.
If you want to use coordination you would need a different example. Say if 'the teacher and student are able to effectively manage their time, then a tutoring schedule could be worked out')
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@Ikuso I really appreciate your help. And yes I do believe that the word coordination doesn't fit in the paragraph really well. I actually didn't want to write it but I was in a hurry so I winged it. Lol
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