Are these sentences natural?

Introduction of my classmate

Hello, everyone. Today, let me introduce my classmate.

She is Rena, from Akashi where has the Japan Standard Time Meridian.

She likes class of (the？) early childhood education and joins the rugby club as a manager at the University. She enjoys she’s school life.

For her holidays, she goes to school club activities, part-time job, and car training school. She is very busy.

She works in a Korean food restaurant named Shijan in Akashi. And She wants to go shopping with her friends in Korea. When that time, be careful and enjoy her trip, I think so.

Well, she’s character is very cheerful and her smile is so shining. I like her smile very much. I hope her smile continues in the future.

Thank you for listening.

　

Question

Are these sentences natural?


Introduction of my classmate 

 
     Hello, everyone. Today, let me introduce my classmate.  

  

     She is Rena, from Akashi where has the Japan Standard Time Meridian.   

  

     She likes class of (the？)  early childhood education and joins the rugby club as a manager at the University. She enjoys she’s school life.   

  

     For her holidays, she goes to school club activities, part-time job, and car training school. She is very busy.  

  

    She works in a Korean food restaurant named Shijan in Akashi. And She wants to go shopping with her friends in Korea.  When that time, be careful and enjoy her trip, I think so.  

  

    Well, she’s character is very cheerful and her smile is so shining. I like her smile very much. I hope her smile continues in the future.  

  

Thank you for listening.

Kia_Rodriguez · Answer

Hello everyone! Today I will introduce to you my classmate Rena. 
Rena is from Akashi, Japan where the standard time is Meridian.

Her favorite class is early childhood education. At the University she is also the club manager of the rugby team.

On her holidays you can usually find her at club activities at the school, at her part time job or at drivers Ed. She is a very busy person

She works at a Korean Restaurant called Shijan which is located in Akashi.

One day she hopes to go shopping with her friends in Korea. When the time comes I hope she is careful and enjoys her trip.

Her character is very cheerful as her smile is very bright. Her smile is one of my favorite things about her. I hope she always has that smile.

That is all about Rena, thank you.

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