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In this composition,I'd like to write about my meeting with tabletennis .
I started to play tabletennis for the first time in my life after getting into highschool .
Until then I had been playing soccer for 9 yeats, so it never occurred to me that I would join tabletennis club though,when I saw club members play earnestly I came to think I want to play it as a club member. Afterwards I wavered between the two chices for several days ,but I finally decided to choose tabletennis. The early time when I begun to play it,I just couldn't play well like others did,but as l keep trying,l gradually became good at it. At that time through playing that I realized the importance of never give up and having iron mind. Also,I learned that I need to make strategy to achieve something.
I will face countless number of difficulties from now on. And If I would be about to knock down by them ,I'm sure that these experiences would be great help.
sorry for my poor writing ability 😥 soa natural?
In this composition,I'd like to write about my meeting with tabletennis .
I started to play tabletennis for the first time in my life after getting into highschool .
Until then I had been playing soccer for 9 yeats, so it never occurred to me that I would join tabletennis club though,when I saw club members play earnestly I came to think I want to play it as a club member. Afterwards I wavered between the two chices for several days ,but I finally decided to choose tabletennis. The early time when I begun to play it,I just couldn't play well like others did,but as l keep trying,l gradually became good at it. At that time through playing that I realized the importance of never give up and having iron mind. Also,I learned that I need to make strategy to achieve something.
I will face countless number of difficulties from now on. And If I would be about to knock down by them ,I'm sure that these experiences would be great help.
sorry for my poor writing ability 😥 soa natural?
I started to play tabletennis for the first time in my life after getting into highschool .
Until then I had been playing soccer for 9 yeats, so it never occurred to me that I would join tabletennis club though,when I saw club members play earnestly I came to think I want to play it as a club member. Afterwards I wavered between the two chices for several days ,but I finally decided to choose tabletennis. The early time when I begun to play it,I just couldn't play well like others did,but as l keep trying,l gradually became good at it. At that time through playing that I realized the importance of never give up and having iron mind. Also,I learned that I need to make strategy to achieve something.
I will face countless number of difficulties from now on. And If I would be about to knock down by them ,I'm sure that these experiences would be great help.
sorry for my poor writing ability 😥 soa natural?
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In this composition, I'd like to write about my introduction to table tennis.
I started playing table tennis, for the first time in my life, after entering high school.
Until then, I had been playing soccer for 9 years, so it never occurred to me that I'd join the table tennis club. Though, when I saw the club members play earnestly, I thought about how I wanted to play as a club member. Afterwards, I wavered between the two choices for several days, but finally decided on table tennis. In the beginning, I couldn't play as well as the others did, but as I kept trying, I gradually became good at it. It was at that time, through playing, I realized the importance of never giving up and having an iron mind. Also, I learned that I need strategy to achieve something.
In the future, I'll face countless numbers of challenges. And if I'm to be knocked down by them, I'm sure these experiences will be great help.
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- Inglês (EUA)
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In this composition, I'd like to write about my introduction to table tennis.
I started playing table tennis, for the first time in my life, after entering high school.
Until then, I had been playing soccer for 9 years, so it never occurred to me that I'd join the table tennis club. Though, when I saw the club members play earnestly, I thought about how I wanted to play as a club member. Afterwards, I wavered between the two choices for several days, but finally decided on table tennis. In the beginning, I couldn't play as well as the others did, but as I kept trying, I gradually became good at it. It was at that time, through playing, I realized the importance of never giving up and having an iron mind. Also, I learned that I need strategy to achieve something.
In the future, I'll face countless numbers of challenges. And if I'm to be knocked down by them, I'm sure these experiences will be great help.
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