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24 mar 2019
- Vietnamita
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Inglês (RU)
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Francês (Canadá)
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help me correct it:
Therer are many reasons that make our soil polluted. In routine activities or in industrial activities, people make a lot of chemical whose bad impact to soil. Next, rain, drought, flood or other disater are also make soil change it nature. And then will talk about consequences. When the soil pollute, tree cant develope naturally. Chemical will go to our body through the food that we eat, especial are fruits, vegetable, so on. Underground water will be polluted too. People even smell the reek which give out from the soil and a lot of different consequences. You can see that soil pollution is not less important than other pollutions and maybe it brings more serious impact than another.
help me correct it:
Therer are many reasons that make our soil polluted. In routine activities or in industrial activities, people make a lot of chemical whose bad impact to soil. Next, rain, drought, flood or other disater are also make soil change it nature. And then will talk about consequences. When the soil pollute, tree cant develope naturally. Chemical will go to our body through the food that we eat, especial are fruits, vegetable, so on. Underground water will be polluted too. People even smell the reek which give out from the soil and a lot of different consequences. You can see that soil pollution is not less important than other pollutions and maybe it brings more serious impact than another.
Therer are many reasons that make our soil polluted. In routine activities or in industrial activities, people make a lot of chemical whose bad impact to soil. Next, rain, drought, flood or other disater are also make soil change it nature. And then will talk about consequences. When the soil pollute, tree cant develope naturally. Chemical will go to our body through the food that we eat, especial are fruits, vegetable, so on. Underground water will be polluted too. People even smell the reek which give out from the soil and a lot of different consequences. You can see that soil pollution is not less important than other pollutions and maybe it brings more serious impact than another.
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- Inglês (RU) Quase Fluente
There are many causes of soil pollution. In routine activities or industrial activities, people produce chemical waste that leave a harmful impact on the environment. Another cause of soil pollution is rain, droughts, floods and other natural disasters that harm the soil.
One of the consequences of soil contamination is that trees are unable to develop naturally. Chemicals present in the soil would enter our system through the food we consume, especially fruits and vegetables. Groundwater would also be contaminated. Not only that, people would also reek of soil.
From this, you can see that soil pollution shouldn’t be neglected as it is just as harmful as other factors that harm the environment and it may bring much more consequences if neglected further.
I’m not too sure if the data and all is correct but I tried to correct your sentences without changing the data too much. I hope this helps! ^^
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