Hi everyone! I am writting this blog to you because i have seen that you are interested of visiting my locallity. So at the beginning i would like to tell you about a really beautiful place in my city. It's placed about 2 km from my house. This place is called a " Paradise of flowers" . It's a vast square on which the flowers grow. The most beautiful thing is fact that there are a lot of kinds of flowers from all over the world. The flowers are really capitivating, and much different than our traditional flowers. In this place you can sit on the bunch and admire the view of the nature or just walk around between wonderful plants. This place is really peaceful and relaxing also, it's as peaceful that you can hear your thoughts flow through your mind. I feel really well while i am there. I hope you enjoy the blog and after reading that you arrive to this place as soon as possible. It's definitely worthly seeing! In the next blog i will descrive you a culture of my town.

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Hi everyone!                                                                            I am writting this blog to you because i have seen that you are interested of visiting my locallity. So at the beginning i would like to tell you about a really beautiful place in my city. It's placed about 2 km from my house. This place is called a " Paradise of flowers" . It's a vast square on which the flowers grow. The most beautiful thing is fact that there are a lot of kinds of flowers from all over the world. The flowers are really capitivating, and much different than our traditional flowers. In this place you can sit on the bunch and admire the view of the nature or just walk around between wonderful plants. This place is really peaceful and relaxing also, it's as peaceful that you can hear your thoughts flow through your mind. I feel really well while i am there. I hope you enjoy the blog and after reading that you arrive to this place as soon as possible. It's definitely worthly seeing! In the next blog i will descrive you a culture of my town.

owenlol2 · Answer

I am going to freely edit this post; "‎Hi everyone!                                                                            I am writting this blog for you because I have heard that you are interested in visiting my (country/residence). So, first of all, I would like to tell you about a really beautiful place in my city. It's about 2 km away from my house, the place is called a "Paradise of flowers", and it's a vast square on which the flowers grow. The most beautiful thing is fact that there are a lot of kinds of flowers from all over the world. The flowers are really capitivating, and are very different from our traditional flowers. In this place you can sit on the bench, and admire the view of the nature or just walk around between wonderful plants. This place is really peaceful and relaxing. In this place you can seem to hear your thoughts flow through your mind. I feel really at-peace when I am there. I hope you enjoyed reading the blog, and I hope that after reading this you want to come to this place as soon as possible. It's definitely worth seeing! In the next blog I will describe to you the culture of my town!" All these changes were made in attempts to nake it seem more natural

owenlol2 · Answer

@urbanq Just a few corrections and emphasis, that adds more character to the writing! You did very well overall, and I'm impressed!

@urbanq Just a few corrections and emphasis, that adds more character to the writing! You did very well overall, and I'm impressed!

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