I just spoke to my brother and told him about this application and it's utility to improve my English. He too sounds happy for me as I will have improved English someday. soa natural?
- Inglês (EUA)
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Your language is a bit formal. Instead of application, usually an English speaker would say "app".
I'm a bit confused about the second sentence. It implies that someone else is happy that you will have one day improved your English, as well as your brother. If that is what you mean then might I suggest replacing the word "too" with "also"?
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Thank you! Is everything ok besides too and app?
- Inglês (EUA)
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You could also change the last few words to "improved my English someday".
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:D I hope, you will keep helping me :)
- Inglês (EUA)
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You might change "utility" to useful, or usefulness.
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