- Japonês Quase Fluente
- Coreano
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Inglês (RU)
Writing No. 3 (Goal: 10)
I love animals which give unconditional love to human
I used to have two poodles over 10 years.
I felt happy whenever I touched their hair, smell their skin.
Having been lived with them, I understood they had lots of emotions like humans. Happiness, sadness, and eagerness, etc.
Felt so sad for a while when they died.
I always have strong will to keep animal, but not allowed to do that now under the house rule.
If I have had an opportunity to take an animal, it would have been a cat.
I have encountered many cats on the streets.
I also have said ‘hello’ with a cat saying ‘Meow’ :) soa natural?
I love animals which give unconditional love to human
I used to have two poodles over 10 years.
I felt happy whenever I touched their hair, smell their skin.
Having been lived with them, I understood they had lots of emotions like humans. Happiness, sadness, and eagerness, etc.
Felt so sad for a while when they died.
I always have strong will to keep animal, but not allowed to do that now under the house rule.
If I have had an opportunity to take an animal, it would have been a cat.
I have encountered many cats on the streets.
I also have said ‘hello’ with a cat saying ‘Meow’ :) soa natural?
- Inglês (RU)
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Writing No. 3 (Goal: 10)
I love animals that give unconditional love to humans.
I used to have two poodles for more than 10 years.
I felt happy whenever I touched their hair, smelt their skin.
Having lived with them, I discovered that they had lots of emotions like humans - happiness, sadness, eagerness, etc.
I felt so sad when they died.
I always have a strong desire to have an animal, but I’m not allowed to do that now under the rules of the house.
If I‘d had an opportunity to take an animal, it would’ve been a cat.
I have encountered many cats on the streets.
I also have said ‘hello’ to a cat by saying ‘Meow’ :)k
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- Inglês (RU)
Um pouco artificial
Writing No. 3 (Goal: 10)
I love animals that give unconditional love to humans.
I used to have two poodles for more than 10 years.
I felt happy whenever I touched their hair, smelt their skin.
Having lived with them, I discovered that they had lots of emotions like humans - happiness, sadness, eagerness, etc.
I felt so sad when they died.
I always have a strong desire to have an animal, but I’m not allowed to do that now under the rules of the house.
If I‘d had an opportunity to take an animal, it would’ve been a cat.
I have encountered many cats on the streets.
I also have said ‘hello’ to a cat by saying ‘Meow’ :)k
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- Japonês Quase Fluente
- Coreano
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