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7 nov 2014
- Japonês
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Inglês (EUA)
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Coreano
Pergunta sobre Inglês (EUA)
Most of the restrooms are often all occupied in the mall. I think they should build a lot more toilets. soa natural?
Most of the restrooms are often all occupied in the mall. I think they should build a lot more toilets. soa natural?
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Indonésio
Um pouco artificial
Most of the restrooms at the mall are often all occupied. I think they should build more toilets (or stalls).
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Francês (Canadá)
Um pouco artificial
I think saying "most" and then "all" sounds a little odd. If you remove the word "all", I think it would sound more natural.
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Francês (França)
- Romeno
Um pouco artificial
tlemaire is right. Avoid repeating frequency words. Also avoid repeating the word "toilet" and it's synonyms. It's probably safe to say, avoid repeating almost anything.
See what I did? *For emphasis*, I repeated the *whole sentence*. But not words *inside* the sentence.
Other than that sounds good.
And congrats for your hard work, nobu_in_japan !
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- Japonês
Thanks, everyone!
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