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I love travelling abroad, and wherever I go, local people welcome me profoundly. I want to return the favor on this occasion. Moreover I think we must make Tokyo Olympic Games successful no matter what. I'd like to take on a role as a volunteer.
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- Inglês (EUA)
- Filipino Quase Fluente
just add a comma after the word moreover
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instead of the word profoundly use with open arms
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